Hey so instead of your annoying notes where you say stupid things not important to the story you work on your grammar and syntax. "He could get a money?" He could get money or some money. Your translations aren't bad but no one gives 2 shits about your opinion like "I thought she was _but she's a loli" if you want to add that add it at the end. You annoy your readers otherwise. I don't know you therefore I don't care what you think